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« Reply #30 on: May 15, 2011, 11:58:58 AM » |
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Great Scott!  But now we have quite a lot about her voice and her singing and roughly the same. Well actually one can never get enough of Chloë's voice nor could you stop praising it.  |
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« Reply #31 on: May 16, 2011, 08:39:11 AM » |
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yeah guys!!! well done! i love it! yes we could put into the scrap book ?  very happy! |
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« Reply #32 on: May 16, 2011, 08:48:42 AM » |
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i would like to say to her something like this:
i know that i was born to know you
today i can't imagine my life without you
you're so important for me
your fan, your friend is all i want to be.
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« Reply #33 on: May 26, 2011, 03:21:29 AM » |
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You raise us up, you're our isle of hope You're a miracle, in you we believe and we'll never stop You're a Symphonie, we feel better when you give us your happiness In your eyes there's the Galway Bay's sunset's sweetness You can correct the mistakes  what do you think about it? |
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« Reply #34 on: May 26, 2011, 06:43:46 AM » |
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Very good laly!! Except for the lines are maybe a bit too long if you look at our previous ones. You know, we should keep up a certain rhythm. Hm if you don't mind I'll try to make your lines a bit shorter |
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« Reply #35 on: May 29, 2011, 02:35:46 PM » |
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ok with pleasure! thank you Ben!! |
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« Reply #36 on: May 29, 2011, 03:16:35 PM » |
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A voice from heaven to give us love,
girl like an angel from high above.
Our very best Irish celebrity friend,
with whom our time we'd like to spend.
Without any doubts a beautiful lady,
you have just to smile to make us happy.
Your heart is almost just like ours,
awaiting a concert for many hours.
Golden hair and sky blue eyes,
that make us feel we're in Paradise.
When you sing it's an angel's message
giving us more than strength and courage.
In the power of your golden voice,
all raise their spirits to rejoice.
As when angels sing to you from up on stage,
they'll write in you a fresh new page.
You're our Isle of Hope, you raise us up,
in you we believe and we'll never stop.
Your Symphony gives us happiness,
as you sing of Galway Bay's sweetness.Well that with Symphony and Galway Bay has lost it's actual meaning now and it does sound a bit strange but otherwise we have this so far. Maybe four more lines and then I'd leave it, what do you think?
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« Reply #37 on: May 30, 2011, 03:17:07 PM » |
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what do you think like that:
you raise us up, you're our isle of hope
in you we believe and we'll never stop (to keep the rhyme)
your Symphony gives us happiness
as "your eyes sing of Galway Bay's sweetness"
(her eyes make me cry when she's singing this song! )
what do you think?
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« Reply #38 on: May 30, 2011, 03:54:16 PM » |
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Then I'd write:
Your Symphony gives us much happiness
as your eyes sing of Galway Bay's sweetness
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« Reply #39 on: May 31, 2011, 05:08:20 AM » |
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OK! i love! do you think it's finished? or you can add some lines! |
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« Reply #40 on: May 31, 2011, 07:00:09 AM » |
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Well if, then I'd only add 4 more lines. Otherwise it's too long. I'll think of some tonight that are worthy for an ending. |
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« Reply #41 on: June 03, 2011, 11:09:10 AM » |
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ok 4 more lines! you're right we need a very good ending! |
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« Reply #42 on: June 03, 2011, 03:38:01 PM » |
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Ok I'd maybe end the poem like this: So please listen to what we say,
for us you're perfect in every way.
You always manage to make our day,
in our memories you'll for ever stay.What do you think? |
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« Reply #43 on: June 04, 2011, 12:58:10 PM » |
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PERFECT!! nothing to change!!
now we have to rewrite it, sign with names of all those who helped to write it, and to send but where and how...her birthday is thursday!
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« Reply #44 on: June 04, 2011, 01:51:34 PM » |
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A voice from heaven to give us love,
girl like an angel from high above.
Our very best Irish celebrity friend,
with whom our time we'd like to spend.
Without any doubts a beautiful lady,
you have just to smile to make us happy.
Your heart is almost just like ours,
awaiting a concert for many hours.
Golden hair and sky blue eyes,
that make us feel we're in Paradise.
When you sing it's an angel's message
giving us more than strength and courage.
In the power of your golden voice,
all raise their spirits to rejoice.
As when angels sing to you from up on stage,
they'll write in you a fresh new page.
You're our Isle of Hope, you raise us up,
in you we believe and we'll never stop.
Your Symphony gives us much happiness,
as your eyes sing of Galway Bay's sweetness.
So please listen to what we say,
for us you're perfect in every way.
You always manage to make our day,
in our memories you'll for ever stay.
This is the poem.
Kimberly, Laly, Scott and I worked on it (correct me if I forgot someone).
We can't have everyone's signature because we live in different parts of the world.
We probably won't make it until her birthday but it's still a great poem.
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